My poem... plz?

Hey, honey. This is a really moving poem, and at least you admit it needs work, which makes it almost perfect in my eyes. If something has no room for improvement, I believe that it is the most flawed. I love the enigmatic "Dear father..." reference at the end of each stanza. I feel that all of your stanzas are going towards perhaps the earthly father that the author mentions, or perhaps to the heavenly father, wondering why He has let these things happen. Very moving, my dear.